Editing notes.

Just reposted a second pass at Chapter Thirteen of The Hellion Prince.  I cut about three hundred words, but added forty back to keep the transitions smooth, so it's about a page shorter overall, and I thiiiink that one page was the source of the problem.  Had to guess, since I was a little short on feedback, so if the problems remain, please let me know and I'll try again.

Slowly, my writing is getting back on track.  Chapter Fourteen should still be up by the end of the month.