Chapter Eleven is up!

[matt_doyle]

A short chapter, and one that I'm not entirely confident about.  There are several problems with tone and structure and whether the message I'm trying to convey is getting across, or at least, I think there might be such problems.  Feedback is greatly appreciated, as always.  And as always, anyone interested in reading The Hellion Prince should drop me a comment, and I'll put them on the reading filter.

Finished my rough draft of Chapter Twelve this morning, so expect it edited and posted by Tuesday at the latest.