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[matt_doyle]

Interlude posted.  Note to self:  I really need to get a table-of-contents post up so that people starting to read don't have to hunt through everything with the "Hellion Prince" tag to find the beginning... but for now, man is it time for bed.

Comments

[iridescent]

I can't see it ? WANT MOAR HELLION PRINCE PLEASE.

Also, will try and post concrit for 11 and 12 next time I'm in front of the laptop without falling asleep.

[matt_doyle]

I may not have you on the dreamwidth Hellion prince filter, let me change that.

LJ still seems to be acting up, alas.

[iridescent]

I can see it but can't comment, so I'll say here that I thoroughly enjoyed it. You can tell Sin and Sabric are pushing each other's boundaries and testing how far they'll go in the face of convention. Very well done.

[matt_doyle]

Well, YOU did a lot of the initial work -- I just edited your half for perspective, tone, and context, and fleshed it out. :-P

should be up on LJ as well now. Why can't you comment? Puzzling.

[iridescent]

I don't know, but it wasn't showing me the comment button on DW.

Yes, I thought it all looked a bit familiar :p

[matt_doyle]

Thank you again for that, by the way -- it really helped me get a handle on writing the character.

[iridescent]

It's brainstorming really, isn't it ?

[matt_doyle]

Pretty much.